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Many of you may not have heard, but I have officially finished the rough draft of my WIP "The Jazz Baby"! I couldn't be more hype, the final battle took on a much more heart warming turn than expected while still maintaining the dark and somber message I aimed to put out in the book. All this to say, it did have some things I want to change. Ultimately the characters are loveable for me, but I wou...
Editing Has a Unexpected Vibe
Mar 13, 2022
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I got to the end of what I had planned for The Jazz Baby and I felt like it wasn't satisfying enough. So I'm adding an additional 5000 words at the end to show what happens to the survivors (not saying who or how many) after things have closed off. It's gonna show a more of a happy ending for some of the people and give a little closure with jokes and wholesomeness to juxtapose the deep dark sadne...
I'm making the ending bigger
Jan 18, 2022
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I decided I didn't wanna spoil any of the killings so this is one that takes place after one of the killings As Sheriff Julia rounded the corner she was shocked to see a pool of blood coming from the first cell in her precinct. She jogged over and looked in to see Hal and Mike snuggled up and shivering with fear. Then she looked at the floor and saw the brutalized corpse of a young 18 year old gir...
My Favourite Scene From "The Jazz Baby" So far
Dec 10, 2021
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