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Autumn Alights

Autumn Alights

Nov 08, 2021

SalemVerse #175 Winner

I didn't even realize I was entering a prompt competition when I wrote this. Fun surprise, winning something when you are only writing something for the pleasure and practice. I've been playing with meter as much as space recently, mental space I suppose when scanning. I notice it has made me more conscious of my word choices.

The imagery of "Tears in russet tapestries/Dripping like the stigmata/Onto a fertile plant/Awaiting rebirth come spring" is one of the best descriptions of autumn ever to come from these fingers.

It is my honor to share such things that spring from a mind as splintered as this one can be.

Season's change, a dazzling

Show of photosynthesis

If only I said goodbye

Tears in russet tapestries

Dripping like the stigmata

Onto a fertile planet

Awaiting rebirth come spring

Sweetness causing a toothache

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