OK, we are moving ahead. The script was sent out to a professional editor to format it for graphic novel style and we received it back after approval. It looks great. I won't bore you with how sausage is made, but there are some structural changes that condense 40+ pages down to 23 pages so it fits a standard comic book(graphic novel) styling.
Remember, this is phase one of 3 phases:
Graphic Novel
Talking Graphic Novel
Live Actor Pilot For A Series
Please stay tuned. You'll be glad you did.
Many Thanks !